BagamCadet's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bruce Lee]

I can literally hear him say "WHooooaaaa".

Great job!

["I" is for Ickis]

Wow, you have actually made a model of a character from a TV show from the 90's.
That's awesome!

crashadams responds:

Thanks! I'll probably do more 90's cartoon characters...or earlier, like I did with Mr Peabody (1950's). Starting with "J" I'm probably going to spend more time on them too and not try to complete them in a single afternoon.

[Zombie Madness]

It reminds me of the style with which they draw those clips for the "gorrilaz".
The pose is kinda stiff, and the head is too small in comparison to the body.
Let's say Zomboy has, somewhat, the proportions of Zombyman.
The logo looks cool and the lightning effects look good aswell.
As for the composition, i'd bring him a bit up as there seems like an empty part that's too big between the zombyboy and the logo. Either that, or make him larger.

Ax3L33 responds:

Great response, thanks. I don't wanna feel satisyed with anything until it turns out epic.

[Comic: Mind of a young artist]

That part with the wow player made me laugh.
Also the NG Adult filter lol.
I didn't quite understood the MLP fanart part.
Though I don't know if it will be accepted in to the art portal since it looks sketchy.
Nice Comics.

Ax3L33 responds:

I have not posted it in the art portal. I sort of regret making all the characters stickfigures, but thats how the original comic was drawn, and I got a little lazy. Hehe. Oh, and the MLP fanart. I always feel bad when i se people wasting their time and talent on drawing ponies, but maybe thats just me. Haha. I draw shitty comics instead. Haha.

[Hulk dick]

Well that was unexpected.
Does it piss out of its scalp?

Rennis5 responds:

WTF?

lol

[Fluttershy]

As allways, great work!

[Twilight Princess]

Great work as usual!

[Practice]

I'm going to assume you tried to copy the picture to the left?

Well i'd say that i don't think you actually used the photo for reference enough, you drew more from your head i'd say.
The head in the picture has a prominent upwards tilt and you drew her straight-two quarters view.
Same thing goes for the nose, you can see more of her nose trails in the picture because of her tilt.
Also i don't think you put any effort in to copying the hair, it looks like the hair of an undead banshee. There are many hair tutorials that can teach you how to draw hair using relatively few layers.
Moreover where are her glasses? And her eyes should be looking down not at the viewer.
The left side of her face is a lot more darker because of the shade. In your drawing her whole face is so pale like she was captured with a flash.

I give 3 for the coloring and her lively expression.

FEARDAKEZ responds:

A Reference, not a copy. I had no intention of duplicating the photo - I was drawing from my head.
I did not want to redraw the photo but take parts from it (how skin moved around the creases of the mouth and skin colouring, hence reference. Yeah I propably could have worked with the hair, I was more focused on the expression and colouring.

Thank you for your review :D I appreciate your time to look at this.

[Nyariko 2013]

Great pose, you have captured the way she stretches and it looks convincing.
Her legs look a bit weird though and i thought she had a cape at first before i realized it was her hair.
Try drawing hair by drawing separate strands together to make the whole.

draneas responds:

Yeah, the legs are awkward. The hair is also an issue, especially dark hair. I still don't really know what to do with lighting and how to convey the feeling of long, straight hair. :/

[Enchanted Woods at Sunset]

Great concept. I love this.
I would have made the trees on the left side less dark though because they are not completly infront the light source.