Great work on the lines but the nose seems short and stubby for an alligator.
But that tree in the middle is on top of a tree it should be behind.
Indeed! Didn't see that one ^^"
I think the old one is better. Mainly because of the girl's face.
And there is something nice about the way it's line is rough.
The guy's left leg ( the one behind the girl's leg). It seems to be so far away and extended to the point where it cannot support the guy's standing pose.
And the sniper chick's belly needs a bit more of a bump on her abdomen. I think it looks like she is forcing a press with her belly muscles now.
Everything else works.
Everything looks good and I have little to complain about besides the feet. both look like their connection points to the leg are broken.
It's hard to forshorten feet, but as with arms and faces, they are complex parts of the body which the eye is attracted to and, often, you can tell by the quality of these how good the artist is.
That and her left leg (the one that's extended for the kick) seems a bit shorter than the other one.
yeah i was having suspicions (and was confused) about that, i had a friend finally call me out on it, so im glad it's no longer a mystery
Nice work! I love how you giive alot of expression with a simple face like that.
I wish people would pay me to draw them disproportional boobs...
Gotta love those anime specs.
"Bra size: C"
Looks pretty good. I can tell you red mangas before because this looks like an actually well built page.
It looks ok, the anatomy is looking good.
Are the girls you draw fanart? or do you come up with their outfits and all?
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